Thread:MissGeek/@comment-3568435-20141002004503/@comment-13187859-20141003201052

Ah, you're very welcome. I tend to get super mushy gushy with my praise and overall obsession with your writing. Even your one-off stories are really well done. Now that I've gone over this (and, by extension, that little thing with Carlotta and Takai that you wrote for Rika) quite a number of times, I'm contemplating updating my 'Let's Fangirl Over Good Stories--' Uh, I mean, the TV Tropes doc with things from this...

You did Leo really, really well. And yes, after thinking about 'hmmm, what could have caused Lissa to write him so well?', I did have the realization of 'oh, she must have been drawing from her knowledge of that Narcissus descdendant from that show she likes'. Honestly, Leo needed more love. I don't use him enough and I kinda feel like I leave him out a lot. I mean, compared to all the other characters used in this story, Valerie, who it's impossible to dislike, Octavius, who I find to be one of my more well fleshed out males, Olivia, who I have a fondness for, and Dinah, who, let's face it, is probably my most well recognized character, he's not the greatest character in the world. But he really got his fair share of the spotlight in this story, and I like that. Very nicely played.

And all my other characters you mentioned too, even ones who aren't updated as often as the others. Teresa and Andria and Karl and Christine everyone... I didn't think Pepper would be mentioned in it, considering how new she is and all, but she got shoe-horned in there somehow and everything...

Apparently watching Missy gush has become a spectator sport, because everybody waits for me to do it, and I do it every. Single. '''Time. '''Wow, I'm somewhat pathetic that way.

Still, I'm glad that you liked my happiness, and I really liked the story. Kinda made my day, y'know? ^^