User blog comment:Bigrika/First Date Writing Contest/@comment-25236008-20140612154730

Prologue: Back but sick Takai Meowth had just arrived at the bus stop near his old home- exhausted from his whole trip- with his mom and sister Neko waiting there. His ears almost popped because of the engines, the pressure from inside the plane pressing on his ear drums and the high altitudes. Then he had to get in a crowded bus to the final destination. So boring was it that he played games on his phone to forget about all that fuss, which soon made him car-sick. He could barely walk out of the bus without stopping to vomit into a barf bag, which made the bus driver shout at him for delaying his route, since Takai was sitting in the back of the vehicle. “Welcome back, lil’ bro. You don’t look so good, did you get car-sick again? A game addict like you would often get that.”said Neko “Yeah…”He paused to puke. “I got kinda bored, games don’t hurt until you play em’ in the wrong place” “How many times do I have tell you not to play games when on an automobile, son? Now your face is greener than moldy bread. And playing too many video games will hurt your eyes, you’re lucky to not be short-sighted, young man. We must go home at once!”said Takai’s mother. So the three headed back to there urban house in a not small neighborhood. Takai immediately threw his luggage on the floor once he entered his room then slipped in his pjs and jumped on his bed, slouching against the wall. He turned on the TV, with nothing interesting to watch at all. Neko was outside knocking at her brother’s door with medication for her brother: ‘’Neko’’:“Can I come in? I’ve got the pills you need” ‘’Takai’’:“Do come…” He took a cup of water from the tray his sister was carrying, swallowed the pills and took a gulp. ‘’Neko’’:“Takai, feeling better yet? You shouldn’t be playing while you’re sick. It could get worse, you know. Werecat car-sickness is more terrible than normal car-sickness because of hair balls so you ought not to lick yourself for now” ‘’Takai’’:“Not really, I can barely press the buttons on the TV remote or walk anywhere too far, how do you expect me to even get to my Xbox control and use it? Also, I’m too lazy for any grooming right now, so defintely no cat licks for me. The medicines you gave me need time to get absorbed, isn’t that what mom and you always tell me? Um, sis, can you check the TV schedule for anything cool ? So far I’ve found just lame old game shows and the news.” ‘’Neko’’: “I’m afraid not. It’s pretty late so I guess few would even watch anything much at this time. ‘’Takai’’: “Dang it.” ‘’Neko’’: “I know something will make you happy. What about going to the school stadium this thursday to watch the school team’s players play against each other during their practise. What do ya say we do that?” ‘’Takai’’: “Ok, that’s fine. *yawns* I’ll go brush my teeth and go to bed now.” ‘’Neko’’: “Alright, I’ll be in my room. See you later, alligator!” ‘’Takai’’: “Bye, sis”

That's just the prologue. I need to finish the rest pronto. Maybe you'll add an extension if there aren't enough entries sent in on time.