Thread:Pdwolverine/@comment-30559258-20170525221826/@comment-26842974-20170603214229

I think why book 1 and 2 have different styles is because you wrote 1 like a tv show, where it's a bit summarized, like it was intended as a script to be accompanied by visuals (which i totally feel like it should be, would be cool movie), and i wrote 2 like a book with a ton of tiny details, leaving it all to the imagination.

If you want to rewrite, go ahead, just don't change the story line too much, the following books rely very heavily on it.