User blog comment:Bigrika/First Date Writing Contest/@comment-24174677-20140707014638

'''Done, ugh I almost ran outta word count so I had to rush to finish it up, hope the endings not to rushed... >.<'''

A figure paced across a large handheld device quickly, running a hand through the pixels on his head that resembled hair before a large dragon appeared on the screen and subtitled appeared on the bottom, reading: GAME ON!

A monster named Takai held his device greedily in his hand as he prepared himself for the boss battle, cracking his neck slightly before leaning back on the park bench and starting the process of mashing different buttons to get different attack combinations, hopefully ones that achieve good hits. He was concentrating on the game in intense amounts, so intense his mind had zoned out from the competition going on around him.

Cheers and shouts were heard for around him as his time was broadcast around the large monster mall, the atmosphere was extraordinarily joyful, for today Takai was trying to get a world record for the completed time for the game Dragons Atmosphere.

His mind raced as all the different combinations appeared in his head, all the gaming knowledge he had crammed into his mind that lead up to this moment roared through his mind as he pressed the A button, and suddenly, it seemed everything went in slow motion. A tan-brown furry hand appeared from the side of Takai’s vision and he lost concentration. The hand knocked the game out of Takai’s hand and the time on the screen stopped. The console’s screen shattered against the concrete ground and Takai was suddenly forced back into reality. He looked up at the crowd to see shocked faces, thought they weren’t looking at him, they were looking at a face next to him, most in a confused rage.

Takai himself looked next to him and saw a tall figure with tan-brown fur, fox ears and purple eyes smirking at the wreck of a console. He noticed Takai looking at him and shrugged, before hands gripped the males back and he was dragged away by the mall security, hopefully far away from the place.

Takai looked to the wreck of his device is shock, he was in denial. He had memorized all the codes and combinations for this and now that monster had ruined it, for no good reason, in fact, Takai wasn’t even sure why he did it. Takai bent down to look at the remains carefully, picking up a bit of the glass and inspecting it before sighing, it was truly broken.

He lifted himself up and looked to the crowd before glancing in the direction they sent the monster away. It was quite a surprise Takai hadn’t lost his temper or had a fit, but he was in front of a crowd, who were slowly breaking apart from the scene. He glanced up at the people who were recording his game, and they looked fairly apologetic.

“Sorry kid, I guess things like this happen, there’s nothing much we can do about it except schedule this again a month from now.”

Takai sighed before shaking his head.

“That’s too long, I can’t wait…”

He looked around the mall, glancing at a few of the shops before he got an idea. He pulled at the strings at his jumper to adjust it slightly before he started down the stairs, much to the dismay of the game records. He looked around before starting towards the exit of the mall, where he saw the mall cops take the monster. He was going to get an explanation out of him as well as all the money he deserved, why the devil did he do it anyway?

The automatic doors opened for Takai and he walked out of them, suddenly having a weird gut feeling to go back inside, but of course, he wanted his refund, and the monster couldn’t be far, besides the mall cops hadn’t gone inside yet.

He looked around, his eyes taking a few seconds to adjust to the suns rays before he heard a strange noise in an alley way. He looked around quickly before he walked over to their, and noticed the fox male and bloodied with a black eye.

Takai sighed before rushing over to him. He didn’t bother asking if the male was okay because, he really didn’t look okay. Takai ran a hand through his curly hair and examined the fox’s eye.

“Uh, did the mall cops do this do you?” He said awkwardly. The fox nodded before opening his mouth to speak and only letting out a groan. Takai sighed

“No need to talk, I’ll uh, get you to a hospital, and then you can explain to me why you did what you did, okay?”

<p class="MsoNormal">The fox growled slightly before he nodded. Takai started walking away, but he noticed the fox wasn’t following, he sighed again before he took the fox by both his hands, much to his distaste, and helped to fox up. The fox then put a hand around Takai’s shoulders to stabilize himself and started limping next to Takai as they walked to the hospital.

<p class="MsoNormal">After much time in the waiting room, Takai heard footsteps from the other side of the hall and looked up to see the fox. He saw him glance at him before walking away, and Takai automatically stood up and ran after him.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Wait!” He exclaimed, before grabbing the fox’s wrist and stopping him. He turned the fox around and looked him in the eyes.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Why did you do it? You ruined my console.”

<p class="MsoNormal">The fox exhaled before yawning.

<p class="MsoNormal">“You were going to beat my record.”

<p class="MsoNormal">Takai looked at him confused before a look of surprise crossed his face.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Your… Your Kingston Fox?”

<p class="MsoNormal">Kingston rolled his eyes and shook Takai’s hand of his wrist.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Wait, don’t go! I have so much I need to ask you!”

<p class="MsoNormal">Kingston glared at him before speaking.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Me? I’m sorry but you were the person who brought me here despite me being in perfect health. I only looked injured on the outside Takai, and now my family has to pay another hospital bill, its enough they had to pay for two funerals for the same person.”

<p class="MsoNormal">With that, Kingston walked away, and Takai just stood there for what felt like forever. He then walked forward, and when he neared the door, he almost tripped over something. He stepped backwards in confusion before picking up what looked to be an ID card and turning it over. It had the picture of Kingston on the card and all different details. Takai smiled to himself before noticing the address, he had heard of the street name before…

<p class="MsoNormal">He made his way to the house, and in no time approached it. It was large, yet it was pretty much in the middle of forest, which was quite mysterious. Takai walked up to the door and rang the doorbell. He waited for a few seconds before a girl of average high and clouded eyes smiled up at him. She appeared about 16. She tilted her head before a small question passed across her features.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Who exactly are you, and how did you find us?”

<p class="MsoNormal">Takai chuckled slightly.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Uh, I’ve come to give Kingston back his ID.”

<p class="MsoNormal">The girl smirked before suddenly gripping his arm and dragging him inside. She then closed the door and yelled up the stairs.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Kingston! You’ve got a visitor!”

<p class="MsoNormal">Takai, meanwhile was glancing around the large, mansion like cabin house. It was decorated in all different colors, and he could see many doorways. On the couch he noticed two small figures of children and from a room he could hear soft snoring. He looked back up the stairs and noticed Kingston slowly making his way down. Their eyes met and Kingston stopped as he tilted his head backwards.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Why is he here?”

<p class="MsoNormal">He asked before he continued making his way down the stairs. Kingston had an unpleasing look on his face.

<p class="MsoNormal">“He brought your ID, oh! And he’s also coming laser tag with us, I mean if he has the time!”

<p class="MsoNormal">Kingston looked at Takai for a second, a look of hope flashing across his eyes. Takai threw the ID card at him before smiling at the female.

<p class="MsoNormal">“I’d love to come.”

<p class="MsoNormal">Afterwards, after about 20 or so foxes made their way out of their rooms they all went laser tag. The female fox who he later knew was Kaylee asked Takai many questions and after she talked to a few of her siblings, she managed to get Takai and Kingston a game alone together of laser tag. They versed for hours in one of the arena, and it was only over when they were nose to nose without knowing it and Takai shot him.